This week, my 5th graders taught a lesson (as a group) to the 3rd graders on how to write a Quality Comment.
Then, the 5th graders paired with the 3rd graders to help them use the skills they were taught to write quality comments on the 4th graders’ blogs. Each 5th grader worked with 1-2 3rd graders, and the results were quite impressive. I was amazed with the patience, enthusiasm, and true knowledge of the content they each shared with the 3rd graders. Here is an example of one of their comments:
That was a cool video. I like reading. Now I like baseball. Was that video made because you like
baseball? And why do you like baseball? What are your favorite baseball teams?
Here is an example of a typical 5th grader’s comment:
I totally agree that you do have an awesome blog! I love the theme of your blog because it has warm, bright, and cheerful colors. My blog is a bright shade of green, with sparkles, and a butterfly. For the text at the top I wrote, “Make Fantasies Become A Reality”. I love this blog, and what you write about.
Just like you, I as well have an after school activity. I do dance with you, and I do volleyball. I used to do running and swimming, but this summer I am planning on running with my dad at night. Are you going to run with your mom or dad over the summer?
I as well like blue, but I also like black, white, green, yellow, and purple. In Jewish Studies, we are studying the colors of flags. Each individual flag has a color for a reason, which is what my class and I are trying to figure out. Anyways, I like blue because it means freedom and justice. I adore the color white because it means peace, and I think that there should be peace everywhere. I admire the color green because it symbolizes Earth and nature, and I love to interact, study, and learn about nature. I love the color yellow because I feel like it stands for doing the right thing, such as being honest, and I am very good at doing the right thing. I admire the color purple because to me, it seems neutral. In other words, if there is an argument, I would be neutral, I would try to fix the problem instead of siding with one person. Just to summarize, no favorites. Last, but certainly not least, black. Black might seem like a sad and dull color, but to me, it represents determination and courage. Why are your favorite color pink and blue?
I also think that blogging is important because I get to express myself. I get to tell the world about what I am doing, learning, and so much more! I love writing because I can be creative, and that is part of the reason why I like blogging.
I love how you love working on the iPads because that is one little jump towards 21st century. I have my own iPad Mini and an iPod touch. What to you have?
Again, I love your blog, I now know a lot about you, and I hope that we can continue to communicate.
We also started to discuss our next phase of our poetry book that we have been working on. The students came up with so many questions.
- When will we publish it?
- What will we charge?
- Will we do an e-book, a paperback, or both?
- Who will our audience be?
- How will we market it?
So many questions, and so much to do…The students developed a list of jobs (with my guidance) that would be needed to begin to answer these questions. Once the job list was complete, they had to determine what job would best suit each of them. Each student developed a resume and applied for one of the positions. I was thrilled to see that they each applied for positions, which really emphasized their strengths. Based on the individual resumes, we ended up hiring a VP of Finance, two students to be the VP’s of Marketing, a VP of Design, an editor, a publishing liaison, a VP of Public Relations, and a VP of Business. They all have a list of their job descriptions and they will be reporting directly to Mike Fisher and myself on a weekly basis. This project will continue into next year. The 4th graders will also be choosing the areas that they feel suit each of them, so they can be on a collaborative team with the 5th graders.
My fourth graders began to work on our final research paper this week. They each chose an important person to research from Florida’s history. Mrs.Hallett, our 21st Century librarian, helped them determine the proper search engine to use. They had to find 2-3 websites to obtain the necessary information listed on the graphic organizer that was provided for them. Next, I taught them a lesson on proper note-taking techniques. Finally, they took notes to use on their essays. We will be writing the papers this week, and then Mrs.Hallett will be guiding us in creating a thinglink. I look forward to sharing the finished product in a couple of weeks (hopefully).